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Mistaken Identity by ~ajrchua:iconajrchua:



She first piqued my interest,
talking with her was the best,
She was young and so lovely,
someone to be with daily.

But then, there was a surprise,
A devil in a disguise,
A vampire who'll suck you dry,
Until you can't move, you die.

She cast a powerful spell,
I tried to hide in my shell,
but still it made me confused,
To fall for her, I refused.

Yet we talked, it's a mistake!
It's not poison, I did take,
I made her love turn to hate,
A Fool! I made her irate.

I thought that it was the end,
but no,  Yay! I made a friend,
She was still nice and so kind,
Now with her, I stand behind.
©2009 ~ajrchua
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:iconfemka:
congrats!
Love its rhymes,and the story in general.
But
what does the "whoops..." in the Authors' comments mean?
:chew:
:iconajrchua:
the whoops? I didn't really know what to write :) haha

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The truth is...this...will you accept the truth if it comes?
:iconfemka:
well,how about the 3 dots ("...") you usually see?
(but it was sth different,indeed.I got bored of seeing those dots all over the place:)

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